Short Fiction · Character
Val Thorndyke
A persuasive young lover who rows Fay out at twilight and urges her to flee her gilded Bastille for a yacht waiting half an hour away.
supporting
Also known as Val
First appearance: ii
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Val is at the helm of the drifting boat, grappling with fear and hope as he navigates the dark loch.
Val whispers of freedom, Italy, and a marriage of heart to heart while the tide ebbs and the rocks seem to fling his words back. He is reckless, romantic, and utterly certain that Archie's yacht and four sailors can carry them past every bond and goodbye. His pressure on Fay's trembling silence sets the moral crisis that shadows her disappearance and the questions that follow.
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Relationship types
- Romantic
- Other
Character groups
- Secondary intrigue group
- Central mystery circle
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- Fay
romantic · ambivalent
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- Fay
romantic · ambivalent
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- Fay
romantic · ambivalent
A passionate and volatile romantic relationship, filled with attraction and frequent… How this plays out →
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See Val Thorndyke in ii