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The Unpleasantness at the Bellona Club · Character

General Fentiman

A frail, parade-ground-regular old soldier whose quiet death in a club armchair turns out to be anything but the peaceful exit it appears.

major

Also known as Fentiman, the gasping Fentiman, old Fentiman, old General Fentiman, the late General Fentiman, the General, the old General

First appearance: I: Old Mossy-Face

As a major figure in The Unpleasantness at the Bellona Club, General Fentiman is not background color—the story leans on what they do once the chapter opens.

Found dead in his armchair at the Bellona Club, having apparently been dead for two days.
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General Fentiman is a Bellona Club fixture, arriving by ten and home by half-past seven with the precision of a man who has spent a lifetime on parade. His weak heart and failing hearing make him an object of solicitous routine — until the morning of Armistice Day, when he slips past the hall-porter unnoticed and is found dead in his chair. Because his death is entangled with Lady Dormer's estate and a question of who died first, the exact minute he sat down becomes worth half a million pounds, and the old man's harmless habits become the puzzle everyone must solve.

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LPLord Peter Wim…MOMr. OliverMMMr. MurblesMRMajor Robert F…SFSheila FentimanGFGeneral Fentiman

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  • Professional
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Character groups

  • Central Fentiman Circle
  • Protagonist

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SetupEscalationClimax
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  • Escalation
  • Breaking point

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