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Captain George Fentiman

A war-damaged veteran haunted by debt and a moneylender's threats, George Fentiman is the grandson whose desperation makes him the investigation's most pitiable suspect.

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Also known as George Fentiman, Captain George Fentiman, George, Captain George, Fentiman

First appearance: I: Old Mossy-Face

As a major figure in The Unpleasantness at the Bellona Club, Captain George Fentiman is not background color—the story leans on what they do once the chapter opens.

A war veteran suffering from health issues and financial strain; expresses bitterness about his post-war life and reacts hysterically to his grandfather's death.
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George returns from the war with shattered nerves and a wife, Sheila, who struggles to keep their household together on too little money. He owes Dougal MacStewart two thousand pounds, and his grandfather's death would free him from that pressure, a motive that puts him squarely in the police's sights. His unguarded remarks at the club and his later confused surrender to authorities make him both a suspect and a figure of genuine pathos.

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LPLord Peter Wim…SFSheila FentimanMOMr. OliverIPInspector ParkerMGMrs. George Fe…CGCaptain George Fenti…

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  • Central Fentiman Circle
  • Protagonist

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  • Breaking point

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See Captain George Fentiman in I: Old Mossy-Face