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The Man in Lower Ten · Chapter

XXVIII: Alison’s Story explained

Alison West recounts her ill-fated involvement with Harry Pinckney Sullivan and his sister Mrs.

What happens

Alison West recounts her ill-fated involvement with Harry Pinckney Sullivan and his sister Mrs. Curtis, detailing how she was drawn into a compromising situation that led to her agreeing to marry Sullivan. She describes her growing unease, the discovery of Sullivan's true nature, and her relief at escaping the marriage. The chapter also reveals the narrator's jealous rage and his eventual comfort in Alison's confession, as well as the appearance of Johnson watching the house.

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Narrative arc

Story tension across the book — this chapter sits in Climax.

SetupEscalationClimax
  • Setup
  • Escalation
  • Breaking point
  • Aftermath
  • Closing

This is the story's dramatic climax because it forces the protagonist to confront the emotional peak of his je…

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Themes in this chapter

Characters to notice

  • Alison West

    Tells her story of meeting Mrs. Curtis and Sullivan, her near-marriage, and her relief at escaping.

  • Unknown Narrator

    Listens to Alison's story with jealousy and rage, eventually comforting her and revealing his love.

  • Henry Pinckney Sullivan

    Revealed as married and a murderer; Alison was on her way to marry him.

  • Mrs. Carter

    Mentioned as Mrs. Curtis, the sister of Sullivan who orchestrated the compromising situation.

  • Jennie MacLure

    Revealed as a spy in Mrs. Sullivan's employ; warned Alison not to go through with the marriage.

  • Sammy Forbes

    Calls Alison from the veranda, interrupts the conversation, and later watches them with binoculars.

Key passages

  • “She told her story evenly, with her eyes on the water, only now and then, when I, too, sat looking seaward, I thought she glanced at me furtively.”

    Alison recounted her tale calmly, gazing at the sea, occasionally stealing glances at me when I also looked out to the water.

    Sets the scene for Alison's confession on the beach.

  • “I was alternately a boor and a ruffian⁠—like a hurt youngster who passes the blow that has hurt him on to his playmate, that both may bawl together.”

    I behaved rudely and violently, like a child who, after being hurt, hurts his friend so they can both cry.

    Narrator reflects on his own harsh behavior during Alison's story.

  • “When I think that I nearly married a murderer⁠—and didn't⁠—I cry for sheer joy.”

    The thought that I almost married a murderer but escaped makes me weep with happiness.

    Alison expresses relief at avoiding marriage to Sullivan.