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The Black Opal · Character
Bill M'Gaffy
An older miner.
minor
Also known as old Bill M'Gaffy
First appearance: part i i
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Narrative arc
Story tension across the book — this chapter sits in Exposition.
- Setup
- Escalation
- Breaking point
- Aftermath
- Closing
In this excerpt, Sophie’s psychological peak occurs as she desperately works to suppress her thoughts, only fo…
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