Short Fiction · Character
Jonas McGillicuddy
A discouraged wanderer with empty pockets and a whining inner voice, trudging home after three years to a wife he abandoned and children who may not remember him.
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Also known as Jonas
First appearance: the malay krise
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Protagonist returning home after three years; witnesses the phantom of his family before the fire.
Jonas McGillicuddy is a failed vineyard-keeper and drifting laborer, thin, stoop-shouldered, and so tramp-like in appearance that the countryside is suspicious of him. He left his wife Matilda and three children abruptly after a bitter quarrel, and now returns unannounced, not from love but because every other attempt at a livelihood has failed him. His unstable, self-consoling temperament—dreaming of pear pies while ignoring the likely consequences of his absence—makes his homecoming a slow-burning collision between fantasy and the reality of what he abandoned.
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Jonas McGillicuddy is Matilda's overprotective father, constantly worried about her… How this plays out →
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- Matilda
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Jonas McGillicuddy is Matilda's overprotective father, constantly worried about her… How this plays out →
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