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The Experiment explained

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What happens

Dr. Raymond conducts a neurosurgical experiment on Mary, a young woman he rescued from the streets, aiming to open her perception to the spirit world. Clarke, a reluctant witness, observes as Mary briefly sees something transcendent before collapsing into a state of hopeless idiocy. Raymond remains unrepentant, believing Mary has glimpsed the Great God Pan.

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Narrative arc

Story tension across the book — this chapter sits in Exposition.

SetupAftermathClimax
  • Setup
  • Breaking point
  • Aftermath
  • Closing

The emotional peak occurs when the soldier awakens to a profound sense of "delicious ease," "assurance of comf…

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Themes in this chapter

Characters to notice

  • Mr. Clarke

    Witness to the experiment; troubled by Mary's fate.

  • Dr. Raymond

    Conducts the experiment; claims Mary has seen the Great God Pan.

  • Mary

    Subject of the experiment; left a hopeless idiot after seeing the spirit world.

Key passages

  • “Three days later Raymond took Clarke to Mary’s bedside. She was lying wide-awake, rolling her head from side to side, and grinning vacantly. 'Yes,' said the doctor, still quite cool, 'it is a great pity; she is a hopeless idiot. However, it could not be helped; and, after all, she has seen the Great God Pan.'”

    Three days after the experiment, Raymond brings Clarke to see Mary, who is now a vacant, grinning idiot. Raymond calmly remarks that while it's unfortunate, she has at least witnessed the Great God Pan.

    Reveals the tragic outcome of the experiment and Raymond's detached rationalization.

  • “With a touch I can bring them into play, with a touch, I say, I can set free the current, with a touch I can complete the communication between this world of sense and⁠—we shall be able to finish the sentence later on. Yes, the knife is necessary; but think what that knife will effect. It will level utterly the solid wall of sense, and probably, for the first time since man was made, a spirit will gaze on a spirit-world.”

    Raymond claims he can activate dormant brain cells to bridge the material and spirit worlds, and that surgery is required to break down the barrier of the senses, allowing a spirit to see the spirit world for the first time.

    Highlights Raymond's hubris and the forbidden nature of his knowledge.

Short Fiction — The Experiment Explained