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Mr. Coles

Character in stories, often a manager or employer.

minor

Also known as Coles

First appearance: my roomy

Mr. Coles shows up with force in Tour Y-10. The page is where that presence becomes real.

A fellow traveler who flirts with the narrator, making complimentary remarks about her beauty.
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KHKate HayesMLMr. LesterMGMr. GarrettCACareySMSmittyMCMr. Coles

Relationship types

  • Other

Character groups

  • Workplace Authority
  • Baseball and Social Circles

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SetupAftermathClimax
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  • Escalation
  • Breaking point
  • Aftermath
  • Closing

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