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A Matter of Sentiment explained

On the eve of a major race, Lady Susan's house-party is consumed with indecision about which horse to bet on, but must discuss the topic furtively because Lady Susan disapproves of racing.

What happens

On the eve of a major race, Lady Susan's house-party is consumed with indecision about which horse to bet on, but must discuss the topic furtively because Lady Susan disapproves of racing. Clovis orchestrates a scheme to get inside information from the butler, Motkin, who has a second cousin at a racing stable. Motkin secretly conveys the tip 'Better Not' to the guests, who all place bets accordingly. However, the horse that wins is Sadowa, which Lady Susan reveals she backed solely because its name reminded her of the Franco-German war, much to the dismay of her guests.

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  • Setup
  • Escalation
  • Breaking point
  • Aftermath
  • Closing

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Themes in this chapter

  • Hypocrisy and Moral Facade

    Lady Susan publicly disapproves of racing yet secretly places a bet, and the guests pretend to admire pheasants while scheming about horse racing.

  • The Absurdity of Social Rituals

    The elaborate charades to discuss racing behind Lady Susan's back, including the butler's coded whisper 'Better Not' and the guests' strained lies, highlight the absurdity of social pretenses.

Characters to notice

  • Clovis Sangrail

    Leads the covert discussions about the race and orchestrates the scheme to get inside information from the butler.

  • Bertie van Tahn

    Participates in the racing discussions and murmurs audible prayers during Mrs. Packletide's awkward lie.

  • Mrs. Packletide

    Eagerly hopes for inside information and later fumbles an excuse about Himalayan pheasants when Lady Susan appears.

  • Lady Susan

    The hostess who disapproves of racing and many other things, but secretly bets on Sadowa based on sentimental association with the Franco-German war.

Key passages

  • “Disapproval was to her what neuralgia and fancy needlework are to many other women.”

    Lady Susan's habit of disapproving was as ingrained and habitual as other people's hobbies or ailments.

    Illustrates Lady Susan's defining trait of constant disapproval.

  • “under the circumstances a second cousin is almost as useful as second sight.”

    In this situation, having a relative who works at a stable is nearly as valuable as having psychic powers.

    Bertie van Tahn's wry comment on the value of inside information.

Short Fiction — A Matter of Sentiment Explained