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Eddie McDermott

A bored writing student who walks out of a fact-article course because he would rather invent malevolent red eyes and Venetian monstrosities than obey anyone's rules.

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Also known as Edward James Flaherty

First appearance: final examination

As a supporting figure in Short Fiction, Eddie McDermott is not background color—the story leans on what they do once the chapter opens.

Late to class, bored by Carner's lessons on avoiding clichés, decides to drop the course to write fiction.
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Eddie sits through Carner's lecture on avoiding cliches with mounting indifference, sneering at the earnest horn-rimmed student and stifling yawns while the instructor explains why aliens need understandable emotions. By the end he drops the class outright, defending his right to call Jupiter's red spot malevolent and his Venetian Threngener a monstrosity. His stubborn preference for fiction over journalism sets up the collision between raw imaginative appetite and disciplined craft that the story explores.

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Character Web

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MMMr. MorrisonPCProfessor CarnerMEMort EddisonPCProfessor CarverMGMr. GelsenEMEddie McDermott

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  • Setup
  • Escalation
  • Breaking point
  • Aftermath
  • Closing

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