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Maud Peters

A young woman whose jealous fiancé abruptly reforms into a smiling stranger, leaving her to consult a newspaper agony aunt about whether his cure is worse than the disease.

supporting

Also known as Maud

First appearance: when papa swore in hindustani

As a supporting figure in Short Fiction, Maud Peters is not background color—the story leans on what they do once the chapter opens.

Arthur's fiancée and a manicurist.
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Maud is engaged to Arthur, whose scowls and bitten lips she had learned to read as proof of love until he suddenly became sunny, docile, and unreadable. The change unnerves her more than the jealousy did, and the little imp at the back of her mind whispers that he is merely tired of her. She matters because her anxious visit to Dr. Cupid's advice column turns a domestic comedy into a study of how certainty, even unpleasant certainty, can be what a heart actually craves.

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Character Web

12 connections

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AWArthur WelshEREve Rastall-Re…JWJack WiltonUFUncle FrederickMSMr. Skipper Sh…MPMaud Peters

Relationship types

  • Romantic
  • Other

Character groups

  • Transformative and military roles
  • Protagonist
  • Central cast of characters
  • Diverse supporting cast

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Narrative arc

Story tension across the book — this chapter sits in Exposition.

SetupEscalationAftermathClimax
  • Setup
  • Escalation
  • Breaking point
  • Aftermath
  • Closing

The emotional peak occurs when the narrator’s pervasive homesickness and alienation crystallize as she hears t…

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