Short Fiction · Character
Eve Rastall-Retford
A proud young woman who fled one household in a flush of indignation, only to find her past pursuing her into the next — and her appetite betraying her at midnight.
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Also known as Mrs. Rastall - Retford, Eve
First appearance: when papa swore in hindustani
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Eve takes a post playing piano for Mrs. Rastall-Retford after a bitter parting with the Rayner family leaves her flushed and at war with the whole clan. When Peter Rayner strolls into the drawing-room as her employer's son's guest, his look tells her plainly he has tracked her down to resume where they left off — and she is indignant for a full five minutes before hunger overrules her pride. Creeping downstairs for biscuits, she stumbles instead upon Peter raiding the larder, and the two are forced into a wary, famished truce.
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- Romantic
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- Protagonist
- Friends and central young men
- Transformative and military roles
- Central cast of characters
- Diverse supporting cast
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- Breaking point
- Aftermath
- Closing
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- Peter Rayner
romantic · ambivalent
Eve and Peter are lovers or suitors, with a dynamic of passion and conflict. How this plays out →
- Mr. Paul Snyder
social · ambivalent
- Peter Rayner
romantic · ambivalent
Eve and Peter are lovers or suitors, with a dynamic of passion and conflict. How this plays out →
- Mr. Paul Snyder
social · ambivalent
- Peter Rayner
romantic · ambivalent
Eve and Peter are lovers or suitors, with a dynamic of passion and conflict. How this plays out →
- Mr. Paul Snyder
social · ambivalent
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