Short Fiction · Character
Eddy Moore
A New York acquaintance who finds Mary a position with Joe Rendal, unwittingly setting up an awkward reunion between the small-town girl and her former silent admirer.
supporting
Also known as Moore, Edward, Edwin, brother Edwin, old Edwin, Eddy, Good old Eddy
First appearance: when papa swore in hindustani
As a supporting figure in Short Fiction, Eddy Moore is not background color—the story leans on what they do once the chapter opens.
Edwin Craye, Duggie's elder brother; initially timid but later appears transformed in New York.
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Eddy is the connection who, after Mary arrives in New York and her money dwindles, comes through with a job offer that turns out to be with Joe Rendal. His letter arrives at the moment when Mary's pride and dwindling…
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Relationship types
- Other
Character groups
- Mischievous young woman and associates
- Central cast of characters
- Businessmen and recurring figures
- Minor love interest and unfortunate figure
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- Escalation
- Breaking point
- Aftermath
- Closing
The emotional peak occurs when the narrator’s pervasive homesickness and alienation crystallize as she hears t…
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