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Viscount Saul

A nobleman whose castle conceals something older and hungrier than hospitality, and whose courtesy to a visiting scholar may cost more than either expects.

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Also known as Saul, the Viscount Saul, my Lord Viscount Saul, Lord Saul, the Lord Viscount Saul

First appearance: number 13

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Mentioned in folklore as a wicked lord who haunted the churchyard and pressed his face against windows.
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Viscount Saul presides over his ancestral castle with the easy authority of a man accustomed to being obeyed, and he extends that authority generously to the antiquary who has come to study his family's papers. Yet his hospitality carries an undertow: he is eager, almost too eager, that his guest should see the castle's curiosities and understand its history. His interest in what his visitor might find — or awaken — makes him a host whose kindness the reader learns to distrust.

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DADr. AshtonFSFrank SydallSRSir RichardMSMrs. SimpsonMSMr. SomertonVSViscount Saul

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See Viscount Saul in number 13