Short Fiction · Character

Ash Holcomb

A Marine commander chasing a stolen stardrive across the outer moons, arriving always one corpse too late to the man who took it.

supporting

Also known as Ash, Holcomb

First appearance: riya s foundling

As a supporting figure in Short Fiction, Ash Holcomb is not background color—the story leans on what they do once the chapter opens.

Struggles with guilt and survival after Pat's death and Thorsten's demise.

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Holcomb is the undercover agent who finds Lou Foster curled around a rifle on Titan, dying in a suit with air still in the tanks, and learns Thorsten has the diagrams, the charts, and the technicians already. He carries the guilt of that failure into every argument with Pat, who laughs at him for claiming foul. His pursuit is the story's engine: a man running a race he already suspects he has lost.

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Character Web

14 connections

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Relationship types

Professional
Friendship
Other

Character groups

Variants and minor characters
Key and minor characters
Minor Martian characters
Supporting and minor figures

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Narrative arc

Story tension across the book — this chapter sits in Exposition.

Setup
Escalation
Breaking point

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Relationships

Pat McKay
professional · ambivalent
Ash Holcomb and Pat McKay work together, possibly as partners in a dangerous line of work. How this plays out →
Harry Thorsten
friendship · positive
Pat McKay
professional · ambivalent
Ash Holcomb and Pat McKay work together, possibly as partners in a dangerous line of work. How this plays out →
Harry Thorsten
friendship · positive

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Ash Holcomb appears across 9 companion beats. Open any chapter in the free preview to see the notes beside the text.

Blood on My Jets
Struggles with guilt and survival after Pat's death and Thorsten's demise.
I
Narrator and protagonist; a skilled gunman reminiscing about his past and engaging in a dangerous deal with Pat.
II
Narrator and protagonist; accepts a risky job from Weidmann and is later ambushed and captured by Pat.
III
Narrator and protagonist; wakes after being attacked by Pat, recounts his recent past on Venus, and confronts Pat about her accusations.
IV
Protagonist who uncovers the deception about his mission and Pat's role, grappling with betrayal and his own pride.
V
Narrator and protagonist; confronts Pat about her marriage to Thorsten and her role in the conspiracy; struggles with his love for her and his duty.
VI
Protagonist; captures Pat, races to Titan, and ultimately chooses to sacrifice himself by ramming Thorsten's ship.
VII
Narrator and protagonist; captured by Thorsten, he tries to understand Thorsten's plans and is shot when he attacks.
VIII
Imprisoned and injured, Ash kills Thorsten and escapes with Pat's help.

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