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The Orderly explained

Colonel Limousin's wife drowns herself and leaves a letter confessing her affair and the blackmail by the orderly Philip, leading the Colonel to kill Philip.

What happens

Colonel Limousin's wife drowns herself and leaves a letter confessing her affair and the blackmail by the orderly Philip, leading the Colonel to kill Philip.

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  • Setup
  • Escalation
  • Breaking point
  • Aftermath
  • Closing

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Themes in this chapter

  • Love and Desire

    Madeleine's forbidden love for an officer and her subsequent guilt.

  • Cruelty and Suffering

    The blackmail and psychological torment inflicted by Philip, leading to Madeleine's suicide.

  • Gender and Power

    Madeleine's vulnerability and lack of agency against the blackmailer, and the Colonel's violent assertion of patriarchal authority.

Characters to notice

  • Paul Limousin

    The Colonel, grieving and betrayed, reads his wife's confession and executes the orderly.

  • Madeleine

    The Colonel's wife, who drowns herself and writes a letter confessing her affair and blackmail.

  • Philip Remy

    The orderly who blackmails Madeleine and is shot by the Colonel.

Key passages

  • “I gave him letters indeed, all my letters. He delivered them and brought me the replies.”

    She handed over all her correspondence to Philip, who acted as a go-between.

    Madeleine describes how Philip facilitated her secret affair.

  • “Scarcely had he uttered the name, when a spurt of flame seared his eyes, and he fell on his face, with a bullet through the middle of his forehead.”

    The moment Philip named the lover, the Colonel shot him dead.

    The Colonel's immediate and lethal response to the orderly's confession.