Short Fiction · Character

Tommy Sweeney

Steve's level-headed buddy and narrator, who warns that loving an image can kill—then walks unarmed into five-to-one gunfire to save him anyway.

supporting

Also known as Tom, Tommy

First appearance: the hounds of tindalos

As a supporting figure in Short Fiction, Tommy Sweeney is not background color—the story leans on what they do once the chapter opens.

Narrator and companion to Steve; reveals himself as Tulan Sharm, the Martian ruler.

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Tom is the steady voice beside Steve's fevered obsession, the friend who says 'compulsions can kill' and means it, watching his captain trade bullets over a mirror he'd be wiser to bury. When Steve takes a bullet in the shoulder and their position turns hopeless, Tom tosses his smoking gun into the sand and steps into the open with his hands raised, promising to come back and fix the wound. His loyalty is the story's counterweight to Steve's fixation: clear-eyed, unglamorous, and willing to pay for a friend's life with his own.

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Character Web

16 connections

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Relationship types

Friendship
Romantic
Other

Character groups

Core romantic subplot
Extended ensemble and cameos

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Narrative arc

Story tension across the book.

Setup
Escalation
Breaking point
Aftermath
Closing

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Relationships

Sally Anders
friendship · positive
A close friendship or alliance, likely with shared experiences or mutual support. How this plays out →
Cynthia Jackson
romantic · positive
Cynthia Jackson
romantic · positive
Sally Anders
friendship · positive
A close friendship or alliance, likely with shared experiences or mutual support. How this plays out →
Cynthia Jackson
romantic · positive

Sally Anders
A close friendship or alliance, likely with shared experiences or mutual support.
Cynthia Jackson
A romantic relationship, with Cynthia and Tommy as lovers or a married couple.
Cynthia Jackson
A romantic relationship, with Cynthia and Tommy as lovers or a married couple.
Sally Anders
A close friendship or alliance, likely with shared experiences or mutual support.
Cynthia Jackson
A romantic relationship, with Cynthia and Tommy as lovers or a married couple.

Relationship notes

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See Tommy Sweeney in the hounds of tindalos

In the story

Tommy Sweeney appears across 6 companion beats. Open any chapter in the free preview to see the notes beside the text.

Lake of Fire
Narrator and companion to Steve; reveals himself as Tulan Sharm, the Martian ruler.
The Timeless Ones
Appears as a young boy despite ten years passing; demonstrates walking through walls and mentions the Green People.
I
Narrator; awakens with dread, hears a scream, and leads Harry to investigate the well.
III
Narrator and prime suspect after his shoes match the murder footprints; struggles with his feelings for Molly.
IV
Narrator and protagonist; falsely accused of murder, nearly lynched, then witnesses the monster's rampage and reconciles with Molly.
The Calm Man
Sally's son, who exhibits an abnormal calmness and shares a secret bond with his father, ultimately leaving Earth with him.

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