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XI explained

Hugh Gaylord meets Alice Crowson, the camp-tender, and is astonished to find she is a young, pretty white woman.

What happens

Hugh Gaylord meets Alice Crowson, the camp-tender, and is astonished to find she is a young, pretty white woman. He informs her of Dan's murder, and after a frank discussion about the dangers from cattlemen, he agrees to stay on as herder for two dollars a day, motivated by a growing desire to help her.

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Narrative arc

Story tension across the book — this chapter sits in Exposition.

SetupEscalationClimax
  • Setup
  • Escalation
  • Breaking point
  • Aftermath
  • Closing

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Themes in this chapter

Characters to notice

  • Hugh Gaylord

    Surprised by Alice's identity and beauty; decides to stay with the flock despite the danger.

  • Alice Crowson

    Revealed as the camp-tender; negotiates Hugh's wage and honestly warns him of the cattlemen's threat.

  • Pete

    Mentioned as the Indian who accompanied Hugh to the camp and took the murdered herder to the settlements.

  • Dan

    The murdered herder; his death is reported to Alice by Hugh.

Key passages

  • “The girl was evidently a partner with her father in this sheep-raising venture, and possibly for the sake of economy but probably because of the acute shortage of labor (Hugh had not forgotten the Indian’s words) had worked as camp-tender herself.”

    Alice worked as camp-tender due to labor shortages and to save money, partnering with her father.

    Explains Alice's role and the economic pressures of the frontier.

  • “"It’s a chance worth taking," he said with a sudden lightness of heart. "I’ll keep the job for a while at least."”

    Hugh decides the risk is acceptable and agrees to stay on as herder.

    Hugh's commitment to the job and to Alice.