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Coming explained

The poem reflects on the presence of God even in the darkest winter days, using imagery of snow, cold, and the sun's hidden but approaching light.

What happens

The poem reflects on the presence of God even in the darkest winter days, using imagery of snow, cold, and the sun's hidden but approaching light. The speaker resolves to watch and wait for God's arrival, keeping hand on the latch of the door that opens onto eternity.

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  • Escalation
  • Breaking point
  • Aftermath
  • Closing

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Themes in this chapter

Characters to notice

  • God

    Addressed directly as 'Thou, God' and 'Father,' the poem affirms God's nearness even in winter's darkness.

  • Unknown

    The speaker who watches and waits for God's coming, keeping hand on the latch.

Key passages

  • “When the snow is on the earth Birds and waters cease their mirth; When the sunlight is prevailing Even the night-winds drop their wailing.”

    In winter, when snow covers the ground and nature's sounds grow quiet, even the winds stop their mournful howling.

    Sets the scene of winter stillness and the hush of creation.

  • “In the darkest winter day Thou, God, art not far away; When the nights grow colder, drearer, Father, thou art coming nearer!”

    Even on the darkest winter day, God is close; as nights become colder and more bleak, the Father draws nearer.

    Affirms God's nearness and approach in the midst of hardship.

  • “For thee coming I would watch With my hand upon the latch⁠— Of the door, I mean, that faces Out upon the eternal spaces!”

    I will keep watch for your arrival, my hand on the latch of the door that opens onto the infinite.

    The speaker's posture of expectant waiting for God's coming from eternity.