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William Bates

A young golfer whose game and romantic prospects are so tangled that the Oldest Member must untie them with a story.

supporting

Also known as William, young Bates, Bates, wretched William Bates

First appearance: archibald s benefit

As a supporting figure in Golf Stories, William Bates is not background color—the story leans on what they do once the chapter opens.

A supportive golfer who encourages Jane; his presence steadies her more than Rodney's.
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William Bates belongs to the restless younger generation of the club, the sort of anxious player whose handicap and love life rise and fall together. His particular trouble is the suspicion that his golf is being…

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Character Web

26 connections

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SMSidney McMurdoFDFerdinand DibbleBMBarbara MedwayJPJane PackardRFRodney FailsWBWilliam Bates

Relationship types

  • Rivalry
  • Other

Character groups

  • Eccentric and entangled golfers
  • Comic and unflattering golfers
  • Anxious and social golfers
  • Protagonist
  • Central and hapless golfers

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Narrative arc

Story tension across the book — this chapter sits in Exposition.

SetupEscalationAftermathClimax
  • Setup
  • Escalation
  • Breaking point
  • Aftermath
  • Closing

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In the story

William Bates appears across 3 companion beats. Open any chapter in the free preview to see the notes beside the text.

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