Golf Stories · Character
Ramsden Waters
A nervous, perspiring golfer who stumbles through rounds and social encounters with equal awkwardness, forever hoping to impress a girl who barely notices him.
supporting
Also known as Ramsden, Waters
First appearance: archibald s benefit
As a supporting figure in Golf Stories, Ramsden Waters is not background color—the story leans on what they do once the chapter opens.
A meek man who proposes to Eunice Bray after being paired with her in a mixed foursomes; on the golf course, he becomes confident and commanding.
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Ramsden Waters is the sort of golfer who tops his drives and loses his nerve in the presence of Eunice Bray, the girl he adores from a painful distance. When chance hands him her little brother as a playing companion,…
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Relationship types
- Romantic
- Other
Character groups
- Eccentric and entangled golfers
- Forgetful and reflective golfers
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Open in readerNarrative arc
Story tension across the book — this chapter sits in Exposition.
- Setup
- Escalation
- Breaking point
- Aftermath
- Closing
The emotional and psychological peak occurs when the Oldest Member, having just witnessed the high-stakes matc…
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- Eunice Bray
romantic · positive
Eunice and Ramsden are involved in a flirtatious or romantic relationship, with a playful… How this plays out →
- Eunice Bray
romantic · positive
Eunice and Ramsden are involved in a flirtatious or romantic relationship, with a playful… How this plays out →
- Eunice Bray
romantic · positive
Eunice and Ramsden are involved in a flirtatious or romantic relationship, with a playful… How this plays out →
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