Golf Stories · Character
Mr. McHoots
A golfer with a Scottish name.
minor
Also known as McHoots
First appearance: archibald s benefit
Mr. McHoots shows up with force in The Heel of Achilles. The page is where that presence becomes real.
The golf professional whose hints Vincent Jopp memorizes before playing.
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- Other
Character groups
- Cheerful and minor golfers
- Central and hapless golfers
- Minor and comic ensemble
- Eccentric and entangled golfers
- Comic and unflattering golfers
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- Setup
- Escalation
- Breaking point
- Aftermath
- Closing
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See Mr. McHoots in archibald s benefit