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Wired Love · Chapter

III: Visible and Invisible Friends explained

Nattie grows closer to C through their telegraphic conversations, finding comfort and excitement in their invisible friendship.

What happens

Nattie grows closer to C through their telegraphic conversations, finding comfort and excitement in their invisible friendship. She begins arriving early and staying late at the office to chat with C uninterrupted. Meanwhile, Quimby, hopelessly infatuated with Nattie, enlists Miss Archer to help him call on her. During the visit, Nattie introduces Miss Archer to C over the wire, much to Quimby's dismay. Miss Archer is delighted, while Quimby remains jealous and awkward, expressing a fear that he will someday marry the wrong woman.

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Narrative arc

Story tension across the book — this chapter sits in Exposition.

SetupEscalationClimax
  • Setup
  • Escalation
  • Breaking point

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Themes in this chapter

  • Technology and Romance

    Nattie and C's relationship flourishes through telegraphic exchanges, highlighting the romantic potential of the wire.

  • Jealousy and Unrequited Love

    Quimby's jealousy of C is evident as he scowls at the sounder and fears losing Nattie to an invisible rival.

  • Illusion vs. Reality in Relationships

    Nattie and C's friendship is built on imagination and mystery, with Nattie acknowledging they may never meet face to face.

Characters to notice

  • Nathalie Rogers

    Nattie eagerly engages with C over the wire, arrives early and stays late at the office, and receives a visit from Quimby and Miss Archer.

  • Mr. C.

    C continues his flirtatious telegraphic exchanges with Nattie, calls her 'little girl,' and is introduced to Miss Archer.

  • Quimby

    Quimby, jealous of C, arranges a visit with Miss Archer to see Nattie, but is uncomfortable with Nattie's attention to the wire and fears marrying the wrong woman.

  • Miss Archer

    Miss Archer arrives at the hotel, visits Nattie with Quimby, and is delighted to be introduced to C over the wire.

  • Betsey Kling

    Miss Kling remarks disapprovingly about Miss Archer's three trunks.

  • Mrs. Simonson

    Mrs. Simonson is mentioned as the source of a merry laugh and the trunk in the hall signaling Miss Archer's arrival.

Key passages

  • “G. M. (good morning) C!”

    Nattie greets C with the telegraphic shorthand for 'good morning.'

    This marks the beginning of their daily exchange.

  • “Good morning, little five-foot girl at B m!”

    C affectionately addresses Nattie by her height and office location.

    Shows growing familiarity and endearment.

  • “I have a presentiment—a horrible presentiment—I'm always making mistakes, you see. I'm used to it, but I couldn't get used to that, you know—that some day I shall marry the wrong woman!”

    Quimby fears he will accidentally propose to or marry the wrong person due to his habitual awkwardness.

    Foreshadows future comedic misunderstandings.