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CXVIII: Evening explained

The speaker confesses to having lied to the Holiest Truth by vowing to keep a festival but failing to maintain the morning's purity.

What happens

The speaker confesses to having lied to the Holiest Truth by vowing to keep a festival but failing to maintain the morning's purity. By evening, the speaker is dim and has been robbed of heaven's flame by a gloomy foe, and prays for help to overcome darkness.

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Narrative arc

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  • Setup
  • Escalation
  • Breaking point
  • Aftermath
  • Closing

The emotional and psychological peak occurs in the stanza’s shift from defensive rebuke (“O rail not”) to a pr…

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Themes in this chapter

  • Sin and Redemption

    The speaker confesses to lying and failing in devotion, then seeks redemption through divine help.

  • Suffering and Humility

    The speaker humbly acknowledges weakness and the loss of spiritual light, pleading for assistance.

Characters to notice

  • Unknown

    The speaker who confesses to lying and failing to keep the vow.

  • Lord

    The one addressed in the plea for help to overcome darkness.

  • Satan

    The gloomy foe who robs the speaker of heaven's flame.

Key passages

  • “O Holiest Truth! how have I lied to Thee! I vow’d this day Thy festival should be: But I am dim ere night.”

    O most holy Truth, I have deceived you! I promised that today would be dedicated to you, but I have grown spiritually dark before evening.

    The speaker admits to breaking a vow of devotion and experiencing spiritual decline.

  • “But my foot slipp’d; and, as I lay, he came, My gloomy foe, and robbed me of heaven’s flame.”

    But I stumbled and fell, and while I was down, my dark enemy came and stole the divine light from me.

    The speaker describes a fall into sin and the subsequent loss of grace.

  • “Help Thou my darkness, Lord, till I am light.”

    Lord, please help me in my darkness until I become filled with light.

    A plea for divine assistance to overcome spiritual darkness.

Verses on Various Occasions — CXVIII: Evening Explained