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The Water of the Wondrous Isles · Chapter

VII: Birdalone Beguileth the Priest to Help Her to Outgoing explained

Birdalone, heartsick and longing for the return of the Champions, persuades Sir Leonard the priest to help her secretly leave the castle to venture alone into the Black Valley of the Greywethers, despite his offer to accompany her.

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Birdalone, heartsick and longing for the return of the Champions, persuades Sir Leonard the priest to help her secretly leave the castle to venture alone into the Black Valley of the Greywethers, despite his offer to accompany her.

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Narrative arc

Story tension across the book — this chapter sits in Exposition.

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  • Setup
  • Escalation
  • Breaking point
  • Aftermath
  • Closing

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Themes in this chapter

  • Female Agency and Autonomy

    Birdalone takes initiative to plan her own adventure despite the restrictions of castle life.

  • Journey and Quest

    Birdalone resolves to undertake the solitary adventure into the Black Valley as a remedy for her longing.

Characters to notice

  • Birdalone

    Grows pale and heartsick from waiting; persuades Sir Leonard to help her escape to the Black Valley.

  • Leonard

    The priest who is beguiled by Birdalone; agrees to provide the key and arrange her palfrey for the secret outing.

  • Sir Aymeris

    Accompanies Birdalone on three rides, including to the knoll overlooking the Black Valley.

Key passages

  • “I am eating my heart out in longing for the coming back of my friends, and it is like, that unless I take to some remedy, I shall fall sick thereby”

    Birdalone confesses that her yearning for the Champions' return is consuming her and she must find a cure or fall ill.

    Birdalone reveals her emotional and physical distress to Leonard.

  • “I have the key of the priest's door of the chapel, and the postern beyond it; that shall be thine out-gate, lady.”

    Leonard offers to use his key to the chapel's priest door and the postern to let Birdalone out secretly.

    Leonard agrees to help Birdalone escape the castle.