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The Walls of Jericho · Chapter

IX explained

At a dance, Shine confronts Linda after she insults him with Patmore's words, calling him a 'dirty rat.' Despite his attempts to apologize and win her over, she rebuffs him, leading to a tense standoff.

What happens

At a dance, Shine confronts Linda after she insults him with Patmore's words, calling him a 'dirty rat.' Despite his attempts to apologize and win her over, she rebuffs him, leading to a tense standoff. Shine's friends notice his unusual fixation on Linda, and he struggles with his feelings of anger and attraction.

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Narrative arc

Story tension across the book — this chapter sits in Exposition.

SetupEscalationAftermathClimax
  • Setup
  • Escalation
  • Breaking point
  • Aftermath
  • Closing

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Themes in this chapter

  • Identity and Self-Deception

    Shine's internal conflict between his cynical view of women and his genuine attraction to Linda reveals his self-deception about his own feelings.

  • Power and Control

    Linda's insult and subsequent dismissal of Shine demonstrate a power dynamic where she controls the interaction, leaving Shine feeling powerless and angry.

Characters to notice

  • Pat

    Shine is deeply affected by Linda's insult, feeling wounded and angry, and later tries to apologize and win her favor.

  • Linda Young

    Linda delivers a cutting insult to Shine, then regrets it, but remains aloof and dismissive of his advances.

  • Bubber Brown

    Bubber and Jinx comment on Shine's unusual behavior, noting that Linda has 'put the locks on him.'

  • Jinx Jenkins

    Jinx engages in a playful debate with Bubber about language and observes Shine's distraction.

  • Babe Merrimac

    Babe dances with Shine but fails to engage him, as he is preoccupied with thoughts of Linda.

  • Lottie Buttsby

    Lottie dances with Shine and complains about his lack of enthusiasm, but cannot distract him.

Key passages

  • “Mr. Patmore said you were just a dirty rat.”

    Linda tells Shine that Patmore described him as a contemptible person.

    This insult deeply wounds Shine and sets the tone for the chapter.

  • “She’s the owl’s bow’ls,” Bubber epitomized.”

    Bubber uses a colorful expression to praise Linda's attractiveness.

    Shows the admiration others have for Linda, contrasting with Shine's conflicted feelings.

  • “Wrong number, I said,” the girl repeated less generously and pushed back her chair to rise.”

    Linda dismisses Shine's approach, indicating she wants nothing to do with him.

    Highlights Linda's rejection and Shine's persistence.