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Annie

A woman from a song or story, possibly a vision or memory of the narrator.

minor

Also known as Annie of Lochroyan

First appearance: iii my old nurses story

Annie shows up with force in Confession. The page is where that presence becomes real.

Referenced in the ballad 'Annie of Lochroyan' that Lady Alice sings, symbolizing the theme of love and longing.
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In Confession: Referenced in the ballad 'Annie of Lochroyan' that Lady Alice sings, symbolizing the theme of love and…

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See Annie in iii my old nurses story

Narrative arc

Story tension across the book — this chapter sits in Exposition.

SetupAftermathClimax
  • Setup
  • Breaking point
  • Aftermath
  • Closing

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See Annie in iii my old nurses story