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The Footsteps at the Lock · Character

Carmichael

A colleague of Bredon's from the insurance office.

minor

Also known as Carmichael, Mr. Carmichael

First appearance: the footsteps at the lock

Carmichael shows up with force in A Common-Room Dinner. The page is where that presence becomes real.

Mentioned as an ancient history scholar who presented a paper on dog barking; present at the Common-room dinner.
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DBDerek BurtellNBNigel BurtellMBMiles BredonMLMr. LeylandCACarmichael

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