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The Cords of Vanity · Character

Bettie Hamlyn

A cigarette-smoking, dimpled young woman whose illogical arguments are invariably convincing, and whose companionship the narrator prefers to the woman he loves.

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Also known as Elizabeth Hamlyn, Lizzie, Lizzie d'Arlanges

First appearance: i writing

As a major figure in The Cords of Vanity, Bettie Hamlyn is not background color—the story leans on what they do once the chapter opens.

The narrator's close friend at King's College; they share a deep but non-romantic bond, and she criticizes his tendency to manufacture emotions for poetry.
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Bettie spars with the narrator in drawing rooms and over cigarettes, puncturing his self-portraits with a yawn and a Schumann étude in nine flats. She loves him, and knows he has recovered from loving her, and says so…

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Story tension across the book — this chapter sits in Exposition.

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  • Setup
  • Escalation
  • Breaking point
  • Aftermath
  • Closing

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