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The Cloven Foot · Chapter

An Old Lady's Diary explained

Laura visits her aunt, Mrs.

What happens

Laura visits her aunt, Mrs. Malcolm, in Russell Square to learn about her father's past. Mrs. Malcolm, a methodical diarist, retrieves her diary from 1856 and reveals that Captain Desmond was a close friend of Stephen Malcolm and was with him at his death. Laura copies the address of Captain Desmond's lodgings, hoping to trace the man who may be Desrolles.

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  • Setup
  • Escalation
  • Breaking point
  • Aftermath
  • Closing

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Themes in this chapter

  • Secrets and Deception

    Laura seeks to uncover the truth about her father's past and the mysterious Captain Desmond, who may be connected to Desrolles.

  • Inheritance and Legitimacy

    Laura's financial independence from a deed of trust and her marriage to the inheritor of her benefactor's estate are discussed.

  • Provincial vs. Urban Life

    The contrast between Laura's childhood at the cottage in Chiswick and the oppressive, monumental atmosphere of her aunt's London house is highlighted.

Characters to notice

  • Laura Malcolm

    Visits her aunt to investigate her father's past and copies Captain Desmond's address from the diary.

  • Miss Malcolm

    Laura's aunt, a methodical diarist who provides information about Stephen Malcolm's friend Captain Desmond.

  • Stephen Malcolm

    Laura's deceased father; his past association with Captain Desmond is discussed.

  • Captain Desmond

    A friend of Stephen Malcolm who was with him at his death; his address is recorded in Mrs. Malcolm's diary.

  • Mr. Leopold

    John Treverton's lawyer, mentioned as being in good spirits about the case.

  • John Treverton

    Laura's husband, currently in the House of Detention; Laura's interview with him was comforting.

Key passages

  • “A man of that age and of those habits doesn’t go far”

    Mr. Leopold expresses confidence that Desrolles will be found because of his age and predictable habits.

    Reflects Victorian assumptions about criminal behavior and detection.

  • “I have always felt I was doing a useful act in keeping a diary, my dear. I am not surprised to find this humble record of inestimable value”

    Mrs. Malcolm takes pride in her diary-keeping, seeing it as a valuable historical record.

    Highlights the Victorian practice of diary-keeping and its perceived importance.