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Electron Eat Electron Supreme General Hoshawk

A grizzled chief of staff who distrusts the boy-president he must serve, convinced that speed and genius are no substitute for judgment.

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First appearance: Electron Eat Electron

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Chief of staff, skeptical of Wadsworth's youth and methods, but ultimately witnesses the President's strategic brilliance.
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Hoshawk watches President Wadsworth undergo cosmic-ray conditioning with narrow, piercing eyes, barely restraining his contempt for a sixteen-year-old commander with an I.Q. of 340. He has spent thirty years resenting the Mutant College's arrangement, and he cannot quite accept that a man who moves faster than light can be trusted with seven hundred million lives. His skepticism gives the story its friction between institutional duty and personal doubt as war looms.

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