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VII: Hudson explained

The family arrives in Hudson and is greeted by a young boy who offers to guide them.

What happens

The family arrives in Hudson and is greeted by a young boy who offers to guide them. They find lodging with a woman who takes in loggers, and later meet a sailor who needs a ride to New York. The next morning, the sailor has been kicked out for not paying his bill, and the family departs early.

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  • Setup
  • Escalation
  • Breaking point
  • Aftermath
  • Closing

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Characters to notice

  • Bert

    Narrator of the chapter, describes the family's misadventures in Hudson.

  • Mr. Grant

    Father, interacts with the locals and pays the bill.

  • Mrs. Green

    Mother, requests an early wake-up call.

Key passages

  • “We were turing gaily down the main st of Hudson when a man of 12 years capered out from the side walk and hoped on the runing board.”

    As we drove happily down Hudson's main street, a 12-year-old boy jumped onto our running board.

    The narrator's playful description of the boy's antics.

  • “He wouldnt pay his bill and razed hell so I kicked him out replid the lanlady in her bear feet.”

    The landlady said the sailor didn't pay and caused a ruckus, so she threw him out, barefoot.

    The landlady's blunt explanation of the sailor's departure.