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II: Starting Gaily explained

The family departs from Goshen, Indiana, in their new car, leaving the nurse and two older brothers to follow by train.

What happens

The family departs from Goshen, Indiana, in their new car, leaving the nurse and two older brothers to follow by train. They travel through Michigan, stopping for lunch near Coldwater and unexpectedly visiting Ann Arbor, where they meet the football coach Mr. Yost. They finally arrive in Detroit late at night at the home of relatives.

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Narrative arc

Story tension across the book — this chapter sits in Exposition.

SetupAftermathClimax
  • Setup
  • Escalation
  • Breaking point
  • Aftermath
  • Closing

This is the dramatic climax because it marks the psychological peak of the crowd’s self-deception, where their…

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Themes in this chapter

Characters to notice

  • Mr. Grant

    The father, who drives the family car and makes sarcastic remarks about the journey.

  • Mrs. Green

    The mother, who comments on the thirst and the abnormal school, and changes the subject to the League of Nations.

  • John Knowles

    The narrator, who partakes of fried chicken and doughnuts and hopes to meet normal people.

Key passages

  • “We will stop at Coldwater for lunch said my father with a strate face as he pulls most of his lines without changeing expressions.”

    The father announces a lunch stop in Coldwater, delivering his jokes with a deadpan expression.

    The father's dry humor is a recurring trait.

  • “Heavens said my mother this must be a abnormal school to have such a large football field.”

    The mother jokes that the school must be abnormal because of its large football field.

    The mother's wit contrasts with the father's sarcasm.