Short Fiction · Character
the old man
Old Donegal lies gaunt and unshaven in his rented flat, joking about the moon-run while his body goes dark around him, humoring Martha by pretending he isn't ready to die.
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Elderly gentleman behind the desk who chairs the conference and decides to land on Earth.
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He is a dying man who has decided that the dead must humor the mourners, so he complains about the bed and proposes returning to the moon-run at sixty-three to spare Martha the sight of him accepting death calmly. His…
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