Short Fiction · Chapter
III: The Mysterious Greatcoat explained
Stockdale notices Lizzy Newberry's irregular sleeping patterns, often staying in her room until late afternoon.
What happens
Stockdale notices Lizzy Newberry's irregular sleeping patterns, often staying in her room until late afternoon. One night, when a girl knocks for mustard, Stockdale cannot wake Lizzy, and her mother dismisses his concern. Later, Stockdale sees Lizzy brushing a mud-splattered greatcoat that belonged to her late husband, raising suspicions about her nighttime activities.
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Narrative arc
Story tension across the book — this chapter sits in Exposition.
- Setup
- Escalation
- Breaking point
- Aftermath
- Closing
In this excerpt, the emotional/psychological peak occurs when both Jim and Rosalys consciously recognize their…
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Follow the arc while readingThemes in this chapter
- Deception and Secrecy
Lizzy's unexplained absences and the muddy greatcoat suggest hidden activities, deepening the mystery and Stockdale's suspicion.
- Isolation and Longing
Stockdale's growing attachment to Lizzy is complicated by her secretive behavior, leaving him isolated in his doubts.
Characters to notice
- Mr. Stockdale
Becomes increasingly suspicious of Lizzy's behavior after failing to wake her and discovering the muddy greatcoat.
- Lizzy Newberry
Exhibits erratic sleep patterns and is caught brushing a mud-splattered greatcoat, leading to Stockdale's distrust.
- Mistress Betty
Lizzy's mother, who dismisses Stockdale's concerns about Lizzy's absence from her room.
Key passages
“It is pure sleepiness, Mr. Stockdale.”
Lizzy claims her late rising is simply due to oversleeping.
Lizzy dismisses Stockdale's concern about her irregular hours.
“I cannot wake Mrs. Newberry.”
Stockdale fails to rouse Lizzy despite persistent knocking.
Stockdale's inability to wake Lizzy raises his suspicions.
“Do dead men come out of their graves and walk in mud?”
Stockdale wonders if the muddy greatcoat implies Lizzy's deceased husband is somehow active.
Stockdale's dark thought about the muddy coat reveals his growing distrust.
