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Bertie Hey

A man whose identity is linked to an ancient and terrible god.

minor

Also known as Bertie, El-Lil

First appearance: the voice of el lil

Bertie Hey shows up with force in Act I. The page is where that presence becomes real.

A college student who laughs at Tommy's misfortune after finding his lost ticket.
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TMTommy MigoshNANalunaJCJohn ConradKAKa-nuBHBertie Hey

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  • Other

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  • Hapless and Doomed Sailors
  • Sea Monsters and Lost Races
  • Ancient Sorcerers and Temptresses

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SetupEscalationClimax
  • Setup
  • Escalation
  • Breaking point
  • Aftermath
  • Closing

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