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Somebody Lied explained

Two farm hands, an old man and his son, enter a saloon to experience getting drunk for the first time after selling their produce for more than expected.

What happens

Two farm hands, an old man and his son, enter a saloon to experience getting drunk for the first time after selling their produce for more than expected. They drink several whiskies but feel terrible, regret their decision, and resolve never to drink again.

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Narrative arc

Story tension across the book — this chapter sits in Exposition.

SetupAftermathClimax
  • Setup
  • Escalation
  • Breaking point
  • Aftermath
  • Closing

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Themes in this chapter

  • Humor and Irony

    The ironic contrast between the men's expectation of drunken fun and their actual miserable experience drives the humor of the sketch.

  • Deception and Appearance vs. Reality

    The men were deceived by the common notion that getting drunk is enjoyable, only to discover the harsh reality.

Characters to notice

  • Unknown Narrator

    The narrator recounts the anecdote of the two men in the saloon.

Key passages

  • “When folks makes a big strike they most al'ays gets drunk, and es me and Lem never was drunk, we says, we'll git drunk and see how it feels.”

    When people come into unexpected money, they usually celebrate by getting drunk, and since we've never been drunk, we decided to try it.

    The old man explains their reasoning for drinking.

  • “somebody has lied to us about the fun in gettin' drunk.”

    We were misled about how enjoyable getting drunk would be.

    The old man concludes that the supposed pleasure of drunkenness is a lie.

Short Fiction — Somebody Lied Explained