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Relieved explained

A wealthy Houston capitalist, living frugally on eleven dollars a week despite his fortune, is confronted by a desperate man who threatens him with a package he claims contains dynamite.

What happens

A wealthy Houston capitalist, living frugally on eleven dollars a week despite his fortune, is confronted by a desperate man who threatens him with a package he claims contains dynamite. The capitalist is terrified until he learns the package is not a gold brick, at which point he sighs with relief.

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Narrative arc

Story tension across the book — this chapter sits in Exposition.

SetupAftermathClimax
  • Setup
  • Escalation
  • Breaking point
  • Aftermath
  • Closing

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Themes in this chapter

  • Humor and Irony

    The humor lies in the capitalist's extreme fear of a gold brick scam versus his relief at a dynamite threat, highlighting ironic priorities.

  • Deception and Appearance vs. Reality

    The desperate man's package appears to be a deadly explosive but is actually a harmless item, and the capitalist's initial terror contrasts with his eventual relief.

Characters to notice

  • Unknown Narrator

    The narrator describes the encounter between the wealthy citizen and the desperate man.

Key passages

  • “A Houston gentleman who is worth somewhere up in the hundreds of thousands and lives on eleven dollars a week, was sitting in his private office a few days ago, when a desperate looking man entered and closed the door carefully behind him.”

    A wealthy Houston man, despite his fortune, lives frugally on a small weekly budget. One day, a desperate-looking stranger enters his office and shuts the door.

    Sets up the contrast between the capitalist's wealth and his miserly lifestyle, and introduces the threatening visitor.

  • ““Is that all?” said the capitalist, sinking into his chair and picking up his newspaper with a sigh of relief. “You don’t know how much you frightened me. I thought it was a gold brick.””

    The capitalist, relieved that the package contains dynamite rather than a gold brick, relaxes and returns to his newspaper.

    The punchline reveals the capitalist's irrational fear of being scammed outweighs his fear of physical danger.

Short Fiction — Relieved Explained