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Sir Everhard FitzArmond, a famous London physician, arrives at Oakhurst Hall to attend to the dying Lord Oakhurst.

What happens

Sir Everhard FitzArmond, a famous London physician, arrives at Oakhurst Hall to attend to the dying Lord Oakhurst. He pronounces Lord Oakhurst dead, and Lady Oakhurst, after a moment of confusion, breaks open her husband's cabinet to find his will. The will leaves everything to a scientific institution researching peach brandy extraction from sawdust. Lady Oakhurst faints, and Sir Everhard steals valuables before calling the servants.

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Narrative arc

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  • Setup
  • Escalation
  • Breaking point
  • Aftermath
  • Closing

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Themes in this chapter

  • Deception and Appearance vs. Reality

    Sir Everhard's professional demeanor masks his greed as he steals valuables after the patient's death.

  • Humor and Irony

    The absurd will, the doctor's theft, and Lady Oakhurst's focus on cream almonds create darkly comic irony.

Characters to notice

Key passages

  • “Madam, your husband has croaked.”

    Madam, your husband has died.

    The doctor uses crude slang to announce Lord Oakhurst's death.

  • “a wild, unearthly shriek that would have made a steam piano go out behind a barn and kick itself in despair”

    a loud, horrifying scream that would have caused a steam piano to flee and destroy itself in frustration.

    Hyperbolic description of Lady Oakhurst's scream.