Short Fiction · Character
Elonie
A female character, possibly alien or supernatural.
minor
First appearance: the invading asteroid
Elonie shows up with force in II. The page is where that presence becomes real.
Tall red-haired Council member who narrates the history of Dondromogon and the Newcomers.
Elonie first appears in 0001 the invading asteroid.
In II: Tall red-haired Council member who narrates the history of Dondromogon and the Newcomers.
Later, in III: A noblewoman of Dondromogon who escorts Yandro to the Pavilion and attempts to seduce and hypnotize him.
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Character Web
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Relationship types
- Other
Character groups
- Alien Rulers and Beings
- Military and Ritual
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Open in readerNarrative arc
Story tension across the book.
- Setup
- Escalation
- Breaking point
- Aftermath
- Closing
This is the dramatic climax because it marks the protagonist’s psychological and emotional peak of self-discov…
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Elonie appears across 4 companion beats. Open any chapter in the free preview to see the notes beside the text.
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See Elonie in the invading asteroid