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IX: Davidson Gives a Warning explained

Davidson recounts his college encounter with Varduk, describing how Varduk's mysterious influence led to the death of a football player named Schaefer and how Davidson himself became Varduk's sworn vassal.

What happens

Davidson recounts his college encounter with Varduk, describing how Varduk's mysterious influence led to the death of a football player named Schaefer and how Davidson himself became Varduk's sworn vassal. He warns Pursuivant and the narrator not to cross Varduk.

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Narrative arc

Story tension across the book — this chapter sits in Exposition.

SetupEscalationClimax
  • Setup
  • Escalation
  • Breaking point
  • Aftermath
  • Closing

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Themes in this chapter

Characters to notice

  • Elmo Davidson

    Narrates his past with Varduk, including the death of Schaefer and his oath of vassalage.

  • Keith Pursuivant

    Listens to Davidson's story and receives the warning about Varduk.

  • Varduk

    Described as a mysterious college freshman who uses a black book to exert control, leading to Schaefer's death.

  • Schaefer

    College football captain who confronts Varduk and later dies after jumping from Varduk's window.

Key passages

  • “Varduk lifted those big, deep eyes of his as we appeared among the ruins of his door. No fear, not even surprise. Just a long look, traveling from one of us to another. When he brought his gaze to me, I felt as if somebody was pointing two guns at me, two guns loaded to their muzzles.”

    Varduk looked at us calmly, and his stare felt threatening and intense.

    Davidson describes Varduk's unnerving gaze during the hazing incident.

  • “He ordered me to kneel, and I did. Then he showed me how to put my hands together and set them between his palms. The oath I took was the medieval oath of vassalage. And I have kept my oath from that day to this.”

    Varduk made me kneel and swear a medieval oath of loyalty, which I have never broken.

    Davidson explains his binding oath to Varduk.