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Old Dan

An elderly character with a story of his own.

minor

Also known as Dan

First appearance: short fiction

Old Dan shows up with force in I. The page is where that presence becomes real.

An old man who rings the bell and speaks of a wise king who lashed the sea with chains.
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In I: An old man who rings the bell and speaks of a wise king who lashed the sea with chains. He mutters about a coming storm. Later, in III: An elderly man who mutters about those lost at sea and engages in a tense…

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MAMarietKHKhorreHAHaggartJIJudas IscariotTPThe PriestODOld Dan

Relationship types

  • Other

Character groups

  • Family and Patriarchal Dynamics
  • Military and Religious Authority
  • Protagonist

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SetupEscalationAftermathClimax
  • Setup
  • Escalation
  • Breaking point
  • Aftermath
  • Closing

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