Short Fiction · Character
The Merman
A mythical merman appearing in the narrative.
minor
Also known as the lurking old Merman
First appearance: short fiction
The Merman's tie to Eilert is one of the pressures that moves Short Fiction—worth meeting in the text, not only on a cast list.
The thirteenth cormorant that rises from a stone and flies over the island, a supernatural presence tied to the treasure and the girl's fate.
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With Eilert (rivalry): Eilert and the Merman are locked in a supernatural conflict, with the Merman luring sailors to doom. With Bardun (psychological): Bardun is obsessed with the Merman, believing it holds the key to…
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Relationship types
- Rivalry
- Psychological
- Other
Character groups
- Recurring character and folklore
- Recurring narrators and supernatural
- Place or character and narrator
- Minor characters and narrators
- Military, narrator, and female presence
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Story tension across the book.
- Setup
- Escalation
- Breaking point
- Aftermath
- Closing
The emotional and psychological peak occurs when the farmer’s son, after a day of wearying drumming and a rest…
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- Eilert
rivalry · negative
Eilert and the Merman are locked in a supernatural conflict, with the Merman luring… How this plays out →
- Bardun
psychological · ambivalent
- Eilert
rivalry · negative
Eilert and the Merman are locked in a supernatural conflict, with the Merman luring… How this plays out →
Relationship notes
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