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Mr. Toole

A man who tells a story about a ghostly encounter.

minor

Also known as Toole

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Mr. Toole shows up with force in Hyacinth O’Toole. The page is where that presence becomes real.

Narrator and protagonist of the chapter; endures public mockery at the theatre and later suffers a comical accident with a toasting-fork.
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FCFlora CarwellSRSir Robert Ard…MCMary ChadleighGSGodfrey SchalkenMUMundyMTMr. Toole

Relationship types

  • Other

Character groups

  • Diverse ghostly witnesses
  • Ghost story narrators
  • Carmilla story figures
  • Fairy and ghost storytellers

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SetupAftermathClimax
  • Setup
  • Escalation
  • Breaking point
  • Aftermath
  • Closing

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