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VI: A Very Strange Agony explained

Laura describes a terrifying dream in which a sooty black creature attacks her, stinging her breast like two large needles.

What happens

Laura describes a terrifying dream in which a sooty black creature attacks her, stinging her breast like two large needles. She wakes to see a female figure at the foot of her bed, which then passes through the locked door. The next day, Carmilla speaks cryptically of love, sacrifice, and a past assassination attempt, while Laura grows increasingly uneasy about her guest's mysterious nature and lack of religious observance.

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Narrative arc

Story tension across the book — this chapter sits in Falling action.

SetupAftermathClimax
  • Setup
  • Escalation
  • Breaking point
  • Aftermath
  • Closing

This is the story's dramatic climax because it marks the psychological peak of the narrator's horror and the r…

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Themes in this chapter

  • Supernatural and the Uncanny

    Laura's dream of a monstrous black creature and the apparition of a female figure that passes through a locked door evoke a pervasive supernatural dread.

  • Love and Sacrifice

    Carmilla's cryptic remarks about love requiring sacrifice and blood, and her reference to a 'cruel love' that nearly killed her, intertwine romance with danger.

Characters to notice

  • Carmilla

    Carmilla speaks of a past assassination attempt, alludes to a cruel love, and displays a lack of religious practice; she continues to evade Laura's questions about her past.

  • Laura Silver Bell

    Laura recounts her terrifying dream and her growing unease with Carmilla's behavior and mysterious comments.

  • Mademoiselle De Lafontaine

    Mademoiselle De Lafontaine joins the family for a card party after the morning's events.

Key passages

  • “Love will have its sacrifices. No sacrifice without blood.”

    Carmilla asserts that love inevitably demands a price, and that bloodshed is an essential part of that sacrifice.

    Carmilla's statement foreshadows the vampiric nature of her affection and the physical harm she inflicts.

  • “I had a dream that night that was the beginning of a very strange agony.”

    Laura describes a nightmare that marks the onset of a prolonged and inexplicable suffering.

    This dream initiates the supernatural torment that Laura will endure throughout the story.

Short Fiction — VI: A Very Strange Agony Explained