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The Drizzle explained

The narrator describes the arrival of autumn and tells a story about God, angered by human wickedness, who consults the Devil and decrees perpetual drizzle to punish humanity.

What happens

The narrator describes the arrival of autumn and tells a story about God, angered by human wickedness, who consults the Devil and decrees perpetual drizzle to punish humanity. The endless rain leads to despair, madness, and destruction, until the Devil returns the gray souls to God, admitting his advice was bad.

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Narrative arc

Story tension across the book — this chapter sits in Exposition.

SetupEscalationClimax
  • Setup
  • Escalation
  • Breaking point

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Themes in this chapter

Characters to notice

  • Unknown

    The narrator introduces the story of the drizzle and frames the tale.

  • Lord

    God, angered by human wickedness, decrees perpetual drizzle as punishment.

  • His Master

    The Devil, who advises God to create eternal drizzle and later returns the gray souls.

Key passages

  • “The umbrella makers and the overshoes manufacturers were happy at the start, but it was not long before the smile froze upon even their lips.”

    Initially, those who sold rain gear were pleased, but soon even they suffered from the endless drizzle.

    Highlights the ironic initial benefit that turns to universal hardship.

  • “That’s the last of the human souls, said the Devil. I give them to Thee, Lord. But beware of using them, if Thou intendest to create a new world!”

    The Devil returns the gray souls to God, warning Him not to reuse them for a new creation.

    Emphasizes the theme of moral decay and the failure of divine punishment.