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Saul Duncan

A hardened space pilot who turns his own cruiser into a trap, holding two men hostage on a course toward Pluto and the vengeance he intends to find there.

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Also known as Duncan, Saul

First appearance: the secret of kralitz

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Escapes from Transpolar Penitentiary during a blizzard; bitter and hardened after five years for murder; agrees to hijack a spaceship for Olcott.
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Saul Duncan has five years at Transpolar behind him and the conditioned reflexes that make him the only man aboard who can land the cruiser. After Andrea's death, he relieves Olcott of his gun and points the ship toward Pluto, offering his prisoners the illusion of control while keeping the only real key. His cold, methodical fury makes him the story's driving force, a man who has decided he does not want to live long but intends to take as many Plutonians with him as he can.

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BOBrent OlcottADAndrea DuncanRHRudy HartmanSDSaul Duncan

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  • Escalation
  • Breaking point
  • Aftermath
  • Closing

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See Saul Duncan in the secret of kralitz