Short Fiction · Character

Captain Brown

A quiet-voiced captain whose steady authority holds a frightened expedition together, until the Forest's hypnotic pollen turns him into a walking sleeper who obeys any command.

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Also known as Brown

First appearance: the secret of kralitz

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Leads the expedition team into the crypt-city.

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Brown commands the armed men on a desperate march through the Black Forest, and he handles their mutinous knot with the same calm he brings to everything. When Noctoli pollen drops him into a blank-eyed trance that only lifts at night, his helpless body becomes the expedition's sharpest dilemma: carry him, abandon him, or press on. His condition forces Paula and Garth to choose between the mission and the man, splitting the camp at its most fragile moment.

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Aftermath
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Ed Garth
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Ed Garth
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Ed Garth
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Crypt-City of the Deathless One
Leads the expedition team into the crypt-city.
I
A tough, leathery man who recruits Garth for the expedition, offering money and a chance at redemption.
II
Leads a faction seeking the Ancients' power source in the Black Forest.
III
Organizes the group's escape, insists on speed and discipline, and decides to build a raft for the river crossing.
IV
Commands the group, suppresses Sampson's mutiny, and receives a reduced dosage of antitoxin.
V
Falls victim to Noctoli pollen, becoming a mindless follower during daylight.
VI
Recovers from the Noctoli trance briefly, then succumbs again; shows a flash of horror at his own vulnerability.
VII
Awakens in the cell and questions Garth about their situation; his chronometer helps Garth determine the time.

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