Short Fiction · Character
Berenice
A once-radiant cousin whose wasting illness transforms her into a spectral figure, fixing her betrothed's gaze on the one part of her that remains alive.
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Also known as the changed Berenice
First appearance: Berenice
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Cousin of Egaeus; suffers from a fatal disease causing epilepsy and trances; her physical and mental decay becomes the object of Egaeus's obsessive fixation.
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Berenice and her cousin Egaeus are pledged to marry, though his love has curdled into something closer to monomaniacal observation. Illness hollows her face and body until no vestige of her former self remains, yet her…
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- Escalation
- Breaking point
- Aftermath
- Closing
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