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Communing with Nature explained

The narrator sits on a hill at evening, observing nature and the city, but is interrupted by a rainstorm that dampens his poetic mood.

What happens

The narrator sits on a hill at evening, observing nature and the city, but is interrupted by a rainstorm that dampens his poetic mood.

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Narrative arc

Story tension across the book — this chapter sits in Falling action.

SetupAftermathClimax
  • Setup
  • Escalation
  • Breaking point
  • Aftermath
  • Closing

The emotional and psychological peak occurs when the speaker’s obsessive pursuit of the divine rose fragrance…

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Themes in this chapter

  • Nature and Artifice

    The contrast between the natural scene (hill, sun, stars, rain) and the artificial city lights (gas flaring, Montgomery Street) highlights the tension between nature and human-made environments.

Characters to notice

  • Unknown

    The narrator communes with nature on a hill, observing children, the sun, stars, and the city before a rainstorm interrupts.

Key passages

  • “I put out one hand to caress them, but held With the other my nose, for these cherubim smelled.”

    I reached out to touch the children, but had to hold my nose because they smelled bad.

    The narrator's attempt at a tender moment with children is undercut by their unpleasant odor.

  • “Though dampened my ardour, though slackened my strain, I'll 'strike the wild lyre' who sings the sweet rain!”

    Even though my enthusiasm and effort were dampened by the rain, I will still play the wild lyre and sing about the sweet rain.

    Despite the rain ruining his mood, the narrator resolves to continue his poetic expression.

Poetry — Communing with Nature Explained